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Flight of the Unladen Swallows by Elrodw and Astrodragon

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09 May 2023 00:00 #2790 by DanZilla
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09 May 2023 00:42 #2791 by mhalpern
bout to read it, but obligatory question, African or European?

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09 May 2023 00:55 #2792 by mhalpern
"Disaster Area Concert"

WOW talk about a reference that wasn't included in the movie version of the guide.

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09 May 2023 05:56 #2793 by Dreamer
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09 May 2023 06:10 #2794 by Rosalie Redd
Chocolate Urinal Cakes was my contribution to the story.
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09 May 2023 07:11 #2795 by Dan Formerly Domoviye

Chocolate Urinal Cakes was my contribution to the story.

I just gave plenty of thumbs ups, and "Looking good" as it was being written.
Also laughing. Lots of laughing.

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09 May 2023 09:07 #2796 by Mister D
Excellent story! :D

Also, the debrief at the end was good... :D
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09 May 2023 19:27 #2797 by mhalpern
I'm sure all the Whateley vehicles give Q-branch a run for their money...

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10 May 2023 20:09 - 10 May 2023 20:11 #2798 by Schol-R-LEA
I forgot about the 'contest' to get as many weird band names as possible which you held. Though now that I think of it, none of those are the worst I've heard. And no, I'm not thinking of a real band such as Anal Cunt or Foetus.

A friend of mine told me the story. He and some others were thrashing out a name for their hardcore punk band in the late 1980s, and someone suggested "Lampshades and Soap".

About half of the people present got the Holocaust reference, and once it was explained to the rest, they verbally dogpiled on the one who suggested it. Needless to say, they didn't use that name, and indeed they never did form the band at all.
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10 May 2023 20:16 #2799 by null0trooper
Sometimes, common sense and restraints win.

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11 May 2023 18:00 #2800 by mhalpern

Sometimes, common sense and restraints win.

Also probably why they had Imp chaperone, she out of anyone knows how to run as a first resort, rather than as a last resort.

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12 May 2023 17:35 #2802 by Naldru
I personally have one thing that bothered me, but it's really a personal hot button. I was taught "It is sometimes better to ask for forgiveness later than wait for permission." It doesn't matter if it is easier, although a number of lazy people view it that way. If they took the easiest approach, it really would look like a Disaster Area concert.

Meanwhile, I wonder what percentage of the readers would not recognize the references to "Monty Python and the Holy Grail" and the "Hitchhikers Guide" series.

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12 May 2023 18:59 #2803 by ElrodW
So - the little tie-in (Easter egg) that I put in was the name of one of the bands - Radically Chick. I even mentioned two of the characters, including the lead singer Brittany. Where is that from? One of my Bikini Beach stories, "BB: The Band" had a garage band where the lead got changed by the magic of Bikini Beach and became Brittany, which led to some hitherto-unattained success for the band. So I included references to that band, figuring someone would surely get it.

One commenter was so close, but not quite there.
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