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Carry On (Part 1) by Fiddlerfox

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11 Apr 2023 00:00 #2742 by DanZilla
Carry On (Part 1) can be found in the Gen 2 section or by using the link below... and please remember our authors are doing this for the response they get... please leave comments where you can for appreciated stories or if you have anything to bring to the conversation of written word and readers.

Carry On (Part 1)
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11 Apr 2023 01:57 #2743 by mhalpern
realized what chocolate that was, he should count himself lucky for only being able to afford one bar.

Micro scenes and bad ideas are freely adoptable
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11 Apr 2023 02:12 - 11 Apr 2023 02:13 #2745 by Fiddlerfox

realized what chocolate that was, he should count himself lucky for only being able to afford one bar.
Is he though? May want to double check Laura and the Chocolate Factory pt 3 :)
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11 Apr 2023 02:16 #2746 by mhalpern

realized what chocolate that was, he should count himself lucky for only being able to afford one bar.
Is he though? May want to double check Laura and the Chocolate Factory pt 3 :)

lower dose is better, might go away on its own,

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11 Apr 2023 02:59 #2747 by Dreamer
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Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.

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26 Aug 2023 18:32 #3008 by Maladyusted
I shoulda finished reading before looking at the comments? I thought it was MGC activating chocolate that I missed. Ha!

Well, I thought Shannon was gonna be a girl's name. ... Getting the top-half, in part 2, maybe?

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