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Paying the Pied Pythoness (Part 7) by MaLAguA

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18 Nov 2025 01:00 #4549 by DanZilla
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18 Nov 2025 03:27 #4550 by Dreamer
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18 Nov 2025 17:27 - 19 Nov 2025 03:19 #4551 by MaLAguA
Thanks Dreamer! I was looking forward for this part of the story. And now that the story is done, I can be much more forward on everything!

To think that this story originally was planned to be intertwined with 'Baiting the hook' but was later separated to accommodate the situation. I'm quite happy with how things turned out in the end. As I said, i do think I should've dragged it out, but it would've been quite a slog.

In the end, I'm happy how the plot turned out and I hope everyone is. Coming up with the curse really took quite a bit out of me. As much as I love Caro's power it's a bit of a homework of its own.

Adding drama to the Dereck-Gwen relationship was kinda the natural way things were going to progress. Now how would it turn out? Will it be a break up or just a break?

Ironically, my favorite section of the story was the cat team's adventures, having them set off in a nonhuman adventure was fun to write. Turning Chris, having them explore the tunnels. Originally, this part was set up so that the plush would fall in the hands of the wondercute girls... but that felt needlessly complicated and adding another human element to the story.

Because of that, Mew's addition to the story may have been a last minute thing as originally it was set to be separated, but with the stuff i set up, it made more sense. After how she showed up at the end of baiting the hook, the hints of the connection were there, so when considering how things played out, her intervention didn't come out of nowhere.
Some clarifications that were needed though were that. First, Grimma didn't made it so the plush would fall off Caro's purse since that happened before Caro would seal her, Mew would've slipped into Whitman had it not happened. The second was that Mew doesn't know how to use magic, she just knows how to 'inject' it. The control with the tangle is just Mew stinging mana into it and the soot rat spell was prepared beforehand.

But, surprisingly, my favorite character of the episode and the one with the biggest glow-up was Marlene Fisher, aka peppercat. Surprisingly playing a bigger role in the story than was expected. Of course she was always Caro's friend, even if she was put of by her new attitude. If you look back at all her interactions after part 2, you can pick up on clues. She was always looking at or carrying a paper, she's often times the one that leads the way when things appeared stuck. And if you look at the ritual and keep track of who's holding what, it makes more sense how it turns out.

Additionally, the arc and the reveal at the end reveal carry some very surprising implications. With lines about the werecat curse and the trick she did with Chris.

So yeah, that's another grand arc completed.
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