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Aftermath: A Just Me Vignette by Domoviye

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03 Oct 2023 00:00 #3082 by DanZilla
Aftermath: A Just Me Vignette can be found in the Gen 1 section or by using the link below... and please remember our authors are doing this for the response they get... please leave comments where you can for appreciated stories or if you have anything to bring to the conversation of written word and readers.

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03 Oct 2023 01:15 #3085 by Dreamer
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03 Oct 2023 01:58 - 03 Oct 2023 15:23 #3086 by Dan Formerly Domoviye
Thank you Dreamer. It's always a pleasure to see what you think.
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Thanks as always for the commentary. It was a joy to read.
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03 Oct 2023 02:44 #3087 by null0trooper

Crystal Hall
Suppertime,
Monday, November 26th, 2007

Why is Jane in such rough shape, she is worse off than yesterday. All those foods, does Jane have severe iron anemia right now? Jane, stop being stubborn, you need to go to Doyle now before your condition gets worse.

One thing that doesn't top internet searches on "anemia" is that a routine CBC (complete blood count) blood test can tell a doctor a lot about the cause. Iron deficiency and B12 deficiency cause changes to red blood cell size and color.

Not enough RBCs, but they are normal cells paired with acute symptoms? A doctor would first be looking for where the blood's leaking out, and asking why. (Acute blood loss is one of the few fixable causes)

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03 Oct 2023 02:48 #3088 by Dan Formerly Domoviye
Exactly.
That's how Dr. Tenent learned Jane had blood pooling up in parts of her body and intestines.

Jane was hoping her brute force healing plus a bit of magical healing she got after killing Fusco and his men, would be enough to keep her alive. She knew she was bleeding internally and tried to counteract it with food that was high in iron, but it was not a long term solution.
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